You are a bit late for Easter.
Maybe work on keeping up on holidays and animation needs some refinement.
Most kids wont get this too easily. Voices a little muffled and the random textures floating around is distracting.
Just my two cents.
This really need to be worked on.
I'm sorry for not getting it in during the holidays but i was given the script last week and told to make this. I wanted to get this idea out there so that I could get a little feedback incase i choose to make another one closer to easter next year.
It was a little rushed in the end and i only got one chance to record voices so unfortunately i had to live with them.
this is my first ever attempt and doing a semi serious animation so i wasn't expecting something miraculous.
I don't understand what you mean by random textures but if you're refering to the background then i understand.
This is meant to by ironically bad to some extent. But I'll take this feedback and try to improve for next time.