it was ok...
the V-cam couldve been better and there shouldve been music at some parts
otherwise noce filler episode
you're very close to bring this to be a fun to pass the time video and fun to watch anyway
this what i have to say:
Animation: was the best from you're other videos still need more action but it much more better then before
music: well the music sometimes felt extremely annoying because it was too repetitive
sound: well there wasn't much so i don't have really what to say about it
over all: 7
and last thing don't do that ring thing to pass the text or you make it no buttons or that we can click the spacebar to proceed because first it was just stupid that the button only appear after 5 seconds i finished reading the text
so i suggest to go back to the old way
and that's it 7/10 3/5
A great storyline... but..
This had a wonderful story to it but it has alot of problems that need either tweakin or removing such as:
Dialouge Advancment: Clicking the Ring to get to the next 4 minute wait for another 4 minute wait got kind of repetitve and.. repetitive.
Voice Acting: Theres no voice acting which let it down big time for me.. although not a big problem voice acting can really spruce up a simple line of text
Sound Looping: if i was to be a slow reader "which im not" id easily tell that your background sounds where 3 second sound clips... you should of made the sound repeat to make an illusion there wasnt a dodgy sound clip
But although i may of sounded like a completely hated this flash animation.. i didnt xD this was a great story to follow.. just if the problems above were sorted you would go from Vote: 4 to 5 :)
This is my first time viewing this series and I must say this is really good! I do have some advice though....when there is shorter dialogue the ring should either appear quicker or the ring should always be there when there is dialogue. Also, some of the animation looks a little slow but other than those things, this is REALLY GOOD.
Dialog too slow
Waiting for that ring sucks. Please change that or speed it up.....too slow.
Really tests patience.