it was ok...
the V-cam couldve been better and there shouldve been music at some parts
otherwise noce filler episode
Author Comments
Yes, yes, it's been a whole summer. You've been biting, scratching and clawing, waiting for this episode to come out. Hopefully, you'll find that it's well worth the wait.
The Story So Far:
Things have been getting strange for Sonic and company since Sonic's Uncle Chuck died and left our hero practically everything. First, an oddball, photokenenetic (light bending) hedgehog named Ashura shows up and joins the party. Next, Sonic finds out his house sits on a nexsis and he gets himself half killed becoming the Nexsis Master! Then, Knuckles finds an ancient evil sealed in the Hidden Palace and, you guessed it, accidentally sets it free and gets beaten like a redheaded step-child!! What, oh what, could possibly happen next...?
These are the credits that roll at the end of Act 3, but I will list them here for Acts 1 and 2, in the name of good taste:
Written, Directed, and Produced By
Miss Danielle Freeman
Character Sprites By
Sonic...Clyent Nite
Tails...Clyent Nite
Knuckles...Veckles the Echidna
Shadow...Clyent Nite Ashura...Clyent Nite
Silver...Clyent Nite and Phoenix
Amy Rose...Gabriel aka. Frag
Rouge...Gabriel aka. Frag
Tikal...Skylights
Blaze...Andy Vader et. al.
Shade...Danielle Freeman
Wechina...Akuma the Hedgehog et. al
Master Key (M.C.)... Edited from Chocobo's Dungeon Carbunkle Sprites from The Shyguy Kingdom
Sheets Expanded with Sprites Ripped/ Furnished By
The Shyguy Kingdom
DanielSidney
Ren "Fox" Ramos
Deekman
Special Effects Ripped By
Gabriel aka. Frag
Sets Ripped By
Gamenerd Advance
Heavy Megatal
Skylights
Custom Backgrounds and Props By
HC-Missile
Danielle Freeman
Set Design
Danielle Freeman
Sound Effects
Findsounds.com
Soundbible.com
Soundfxcenter.com
Shadowwaker15 and Shadefalcon
Music
Lunar Silver Star Story Complete
Game Arts and Working Designs 1992-1999
Lunar 2 Eternal Blue Complete
Game Arts and Working Designs 1994-2000
"Starlight Zone Theme"
Sega,1991 Guitar version Performed By
Danielle Freeman, 2010
Special Thanks To
Shadette, for the character design that inspired the series.
Shadowwalker15 and Shadefalcon, for showing me that I don't always have to "lone wolf" it.
Everyone who rips, creates, and posts sprites on the web.
almost there
you're very close to bring this to be a fun to pass the time video and fun to watch anyway
this what i have to say:
Animation: was the best from you're other videos still need more action but it much more better then before
music: well the music sometimes felt extremely annoying because it was too repetitive
sound: well there wasn't much so i don't have really what to say about it
over all: 7
and last thing don't do that ring thing to pass the text or you make it no buttons or that we can click the spacebar to proceed because first it was just stupid that the button only appear after 5 seconds i finished reading the text
so i suggest to go back to the old way
and that's it 7/10 3/5
A great storyline... but..
This had a wonderful story to it but it has alot of problems that need either tweakin or removing such as:
Dialouge Advancment: Clicking the Ring to get to the next 4 minute wait for another 4 minute wait got kind of repetitve and.. repetitive.
Voice Acting: Theres no voice acting which let it down big time for me.. although not a big problem voice acting can really spruce up a simple line of text
Sound Looping: if i was to be a slow reader "which im not" id easily tell that your background sounds where 3 second sound clips... you should of made the sound repeat to make an illusion there wasnt a dodgy sound clip
But although i may of sounded like a completely hated this flash animation.. i didnt xD this was a great story to follow.. just if the problems above were sorted you would go from Vote: 4 to 5 :)
Awsome!
This is my first time viewing this series and I must say this is really good! I do have some advice though....when there is shorter dialogue the ring should either appear quicker or the ring should always be there when there is dialogue. Also, some of the animation looks a little slow but other than those things, this is REALLY GOOD.
Dialog too slow
Waiting for that ring sucks. Please change that or speed it up.....too slow.
Really tests patience.