theres nothing much to it
it would be great if you made it longer :)
It's badly animated, you drew the letters yourself even though flash has a font tool built in, you used a very low fps count and it was ONLY AN INTRO.
The preloader works, so that's a plus.
Other than that, it's very bad, you must practice more.
I'm not sure what I just saw, but I'm sure I don't want to see more.