Nice
It's my first madness animation...
Nice
Missing a few key elements.
For a first madness animation, not that bad. However, here is something that could help you out:
Most madness spin-offs do not contain any voices, and the sprites seem simplistic, but it's the animation and fluidity of their motions that lets them convey emotion. Animation skill with these sprites will take time, so keep practicing, and you'll make your next submission even better.
On a side note, a "play" and "replay" button would be greatly appreciated in the future. It's a bit inconvenient to have to reload the page to see a replay, and having to instantly scroll down to see all of it.
So, in short, an excellent first try, but keep practicing.
-Clock Assassin
I don't need few key elements. I'm the animator of the future.
Good
I say its good at start xD 8/10
Comical but Abroubtly Short
Graphics: The flash was somewhat accurately animated compared to moment of the graphics. The actual graphics were still simple but did not cease to deliver the punch-line; although the flash was significantly short, it still made me chuckle.
Ideas: The concept of this Counter-Strike parody was not just funny but realistic to the actual gameplay of the original work, making the comedy easier to relate to, although this is a single-joke flash, it animates only one punch line.
The Animation/Summary: The animation was rather simplistic although it did not fail to satisfy, there was nearly no other point in this flash besides the one joke and the madness characters.
Constructive Criticism: The only places to improve are the length of the comedy and the animation is a big one; as it was far too simple and short to yet be compared to larger shorts. I found the overall flash quite funny and would say it was a satisfactory quick-short in terms of flash.
-J29
Thanks. I'll be better next time.