Hahah, I like it, it is funny!
But yeah, as stated by others you should increase the fps a little. Variation in perspectives is very important to get the viewers attention
Thanks for the feedback!
I'm currently trying to get used to using 25fps, so hopefully my next animation will look a lot smoother :)
are you trying to say...
...that my bright green cardigan is nerdy? lol
It wasn't half bad.
I liked the music.
This is great for a first submission!
Keep it up, this actuality has some cool parts> I do recommend getting a little more creative with your "Camera angles" though :p
Not too bad for a first, although the sun looked off, and where the guy's arms are swinging to run, you should've drawn some stripes instead of making it transparent and relying on the body stripes. Also, experiment with higher frame rates. 24 or 30 is good.