Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated! I really hope you like it.
Ironically, this was made using a mouse to draw and I don't own a Mac. Hoorah!
Nice Try
I used to draw with a mouse fairly well actually. On paint at least.
I do have to say your hand looked rather deformed on the mouse, since it was out the outside. Thumbs more then likely are on the side of your hand close to your body, On the right hand it will be on the left and on the left it will be on the right.
Other wise I thought it was a fairly good flash. A bit blocky (or choppy?) but I am not a flash animator so I don't know how to fix that to help you.
Oh lol you noticed the hand thing. Yeah, I already animated it and I'm like whatevs but then I accidentally did it again. Thanks for the review! :)
Awesome
Great Error Message!
Thanks! At first I thought maybe my video showed up as an error! :)
I draw with a mouse
and it works just fine..... and i use a PC, so i dont see what you problem is.Ppractise (not excuses) make perfect. 2/10 1/5 you need to improve your art.
Thanks for your review. I'm not saying that drawing with a mouse is the reason for my lack of artistic talent. As an animator, I find it more efficient, especially for frame by frame, to use a tablet. If you've done animation before you would probably understand. Also, I never criticized PCs, it's just that I have a Mac displayed in the video itself.
I KNOW XD
thats why im saving up for a cintiq XP
Good
Well it's pretty funny, you should make a longer flash movie with better graphics and post it on Newgrounds.
Thanks! I'm probably going to have improved once my tablet pen comes in. The only problem is that my ideas are pretty short term.