Good start
You definitely had a cool start but you didn't really take it in the right direction.
Author Comments
My first Flash and, consequently, my first Flash submission. I had lots of fun making it, and I hope to make more in the future. Thanks for watching and enjoy!
Includes music "Merry Go" by Kevin MacLeod, and "The Beast" by Jim Dooley.
amazing first flash
This could seriously be on the front page. You have a natural talent here, keep making flashes. Great short, love the animation style, and brief message.
GREAT
this is really good frame by frame for your first flash! Really fluid motion!