Literally the best flash I've seen all day

It was quite enjoyable; short, sweet, and to the point. I can't wait to see what your future career hold. Just try to get some sound in there and you're good to go!

The potential is there

Just make the movie longer and try to develop a decent storyline next time.

Umm...

This shouldn't have been submitted, really. Your artwork isn't that good, but don't let that stop you. I've seen great movies with crappy/simplistic artwork before (Dad's Home comes to mind). The key thing here is there's no point to the short. If you have a story to tell, tell it! But put effort into it, draw it as best you can, add a replay function, and definitely add some sound, even if it's just music. This particular film has almost no merit, but that's no reason you shouldn't submit another one. Just put in the time to make your next one worth watching!

Needs major improvement

This movie was just bad.

To start off with, the purpose of the movie was just stupid. I giant monster eating a human? How many times has that been seen. Try something different, that idea is so overused now that it is becoming boring.

Second, where is the music and sound? If you were using a flash player you must have some way to import sounds files. Try adding something to keep people engaged in a video.

Third, No replay button...moving on.

Four, the art in this was just....eh...bad. It was not appealing to look at, not one bit. I'm not trying to be harsh on your drawing ability but not everyone has the skill to do that. Trying using sprites or something already pre-drawn that you can animate.

Since this was your first flash, I'd say give it another shot; I'm not sure how much this will help you but I hope that it can guide you to a better flash video.