I guess sense this is you're first "real" flash Ill give it three and a half starts. The comedy is okay, I guess its just not my type but still its an okay flash. Note sure if you used a mouse or not but if you did then the drawings are okay. But either way they still look a little rushed. I mean to spend "five days" on a a minute and a half song is an okay thing. It just seemed that the drawing are a tad sloppy. But the animation itself was really well. Very smooth and not jagged. So take this as constructive criticism. I hope for you to get better as an animator and see you hopefully rise to the top.