That was pretty cool

great plot and theme and I loved the music, I have to agree with starlit lies on the fact that it needs to run more smoothly. And next time, add a preloader.

that was pretty bad...

The animation needs to run more smoothly first off, and the acting was really cheesy. I almost cried just listening to it! Try using subtitles next time...

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revenge

revenge

Could be better

Needs better animation and graphics. Story and music are good.