You have a very good narration!!!
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david tells a story about the time he went out on a date with a girl when he was 16-17 years old
Good potential with this and great storytelling
GagaManMusic responds:
thank you
A for potetial.
funny/embarrassing story...
pretty good story telling, better than some of the newer daily submissions
so in all, work on your animation and u got potential man.
keep it up.
O.k.
Quite good art, but animation rather basic. Shame not to animate the car a bit better. Sound good, story good. Made me smile a little
ITS GOOD BUT...
When you say it was late, make the sky darker, and please improve the walking.
Bye!