Seen a million times before
Not original, or visually compelling.
Just the cancer of newgrounds
Author Comments
Hi everybody! This is my first Flash movie which I have done. I'm gonna create more episodes in future. I hope you enjoy. :) Oh, This video have not a menu, because I dunno how to make 'em. ;P
kool
this seems very promising! nice sprites you used, and how you managed them, really nice, you used very well the music and sound effects, just that the story was quite annoying, good, but quite annoying, you can make better histories. but that way its really kool, keep it up!
where does pokemon come into mushroom kingdom?
the animation and music are ok
but why is the writing like a kid that was 3 wrote it?
Rayquick responds:
I'm not from USA or United kindom, so english is only my 2. language. That's why I can write english like kid.
Alright
Ok for a first try. But it doesnt really have anything to follow
average i guess
im giving it 8 because its your first submission and i think my first submission(wich dont exist)would be way worse than that...
music was ok,graphics too since its a sprite movie but i just dont see why giratina attacked mario and luigi,so,you should've putted a story behind it.also giratina's scream get annoying the 3rd time you hear it or so...and you could have made it longer instead of just saying "to be continued" and to let us wait for the sequel but im not decreasing your score for that.
Rayquick responds:
Yeah, I didn't make story, so that's why this annoying. My layers in flash cs3 was going to junk when I made this. :P So I decided to make other episodes, and wait your responds. Oh, and I can MAYBE make a menu for next episode.
Credits & Info
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- Votes
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- Score
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3.00 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jul 18, 2011
- 10:31 AM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Original