It has some good points...
The artwork is pretty good, but it isn't really animated well. It could use colors. Some of the subtitles went by too fast to read. You need to add sound, that would make it a lot better. Get some of your friends together, buy a microphone for your computer, download some recording software, and start adding voices to this. Music and sound effects would also help too. The story line is kind of confusing since it has nothing to do with any of the LoZ games and starts in the middle of some fight. You have a lot of potential and good art skills, but you just need to add more.
it has alot of potential try making it so that its easyer to read the subtitles maybe add a little battle music and sound effects and it would be alot better but besides that not bad keep up the good work
i found the animation really good like anime, but the text is going to fast mayb you got to see some help with fps and a ng loader would be nice :)
you just used a looping gif
No sound? Comeon... put some work into this. Animation was decent though.