OK I guess...
This one was more crappily animated and the lip syncing was bad. Try better next time!
More crappily animated? Do you have some examples? And are you sure the bad lip synching wasn't just because of lag on your computer's part? Because I pretty much did it exactly the same as I've been doing it for a while now. But it is possible that I somehow did a worse job in here. I would love if you could send me examples of what you're talking about so I could improve on it!
cant say bad, cause i can't make flashes :P
but Thumbs up^^
So if you could make flashes, you'd say it was bad? But then, you gave me a 9, so you must have liked to to some degree xD. Thanks for the review, dude!
The jokes could have been better.
The jokes could have been better. You could also have skipped doing a credits scene for a 3(?) minute short. It seems kind of pointless. Same goes for introductions. Rahter you'd have a fulfilling menu screen, replay menu.
Also, work a bit more on the art, and the tilt tweens are kind of annoying. I know, it gives the animation a kind of nice feel and touch, but it also looks a bit cheap when it happens frequently.
Other wise, good job.
Yeah, I think the jokes are what dropped this animation's score down so low. They weren't the best, I just didn't realize they were THAT bad. I guess I could have skipped a credits scene, I just enjoy featuring a different audio portal song for the credits of every animation I make xD. The introduction was supposed to be its own little joke though, so I don't regret putting that in.
I admit, I'm not a very good artist, but with each animation I improve a bit, so the art is slowly but surely getting better. And the tilt tweens, I promise I won't use them as much. I did like the effect it had, though.
Anyway, thanks for the review! I'm glad you didn't base your score entirely on the quality of the jokes =)
I dunno... it's better than what the score is... I guess haters just gon' hate.
Well yeah the jokes are pretty good, just not epic. I suppose people don't understand good humor when they see it.
I think the low score is really all about the jokes. They weren't the best, but I do wish people had paid a little more attention to my improvements in animation and voice acting as well. Thanks for the review, dude!
Good All around just weak humor
The animation was decent and great voice acting just the jokes...a little off/corny or not really funny but overall it was pretty good just work on the jokes i get where your trying to go with this but yeah just work on them :X
Thanks, I tried to put more time into the animation, and I worked hard to get RicePirate to voice some characters as well as try to improve my own voice acting a little. I think the bad jokes is what killed this animation though, because nobody seemed to find them very funny =P. Thanks for the review though, dude!