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its a very good story but is rare xD

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what the

make it longer and better

Not the worst

This had some good features in that the use of graphics was actually really good. The best part is probably how there's such a wide variety of enemies. It seems like this would have worked out a lot better if it was an actual game. There isn't even that much that happens. It's just Mario getting attacked by these guys and he dies. You could have also tried to put in a wider variety of background and have him move into other areas.

At least the sounds and voice work were authentic. I am not sure if pressing "Star" was a typo or if it was part of the joke. The biggest thing to improve on is to have it be longer with more things going on. It also seems to be a bit too big, there's not much reason for there to be such a wide screen. At least it's faithful to my all-time favorite video game!

meh

learn how to write

welll....

its not bad.. make it longer man

Uhh

It needs to be a bit longer...

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3.23 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 10, 2011
3:05 PM EDT