Wow...
Are you a fat kid your self sir?
Author Comments
This is probably the first flash I ever made that didn't make my eyes through up when I watched it.
I may add to this flash but don't get your hopes up because I plan to make something newer first.
(that's right, I'm working on something)
InternetMonkey responds:
Actually I'm very skinny..........so uh....yeah.......
Terrible, but...
It's good to see a fat stick dude for a change
InternetMonkey responds:
was the terrible part really nessessary? What happened to the good old fashioned I've seen better.
WTF
This is not good at all
InternetMonkey responds:
did you even read the description? it's like half finished. and very old
Goodjob!
The story was quite interesting, and the drawings were nice. You had an interesting concept for telling the story that's worth more experimentation. However, it might be worth adding some sound effects (silence isn't exactly appealing). Also, I felt bored at times waiting for the next scene. You could shorten the time between each scene, and make some of the animations faster.
Good work on your first try!
InternetMonkey responds:
Thanks I plan to edit it soon, I'm glad there are SOME supportive people on newgrounds.