LOL ive been there before.
Todays youth...
this is funny, but i agree with the bottom comment.
The play button, and the voices and an end screen.
but the Writing is funny.
and for your first flash i believe this needs more views man. Pronto!
Author Comments
Hey everyone this is the first short for my new series Today's Youth
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Good first flash
You did good for your first flash man just want to suggest some things. A play button is always nice so I pick when I want to start the movie. Plot was ok who doesn't like smoking j-dawgs? Also with time your flash skills will just get better and use your friends as voice actors to get them new voices. Other then that great job man and I will be looking out for your series.
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Pretty good first effort
It was cleverly delivered for humor that's so crude. Thumbs up!
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funny
enough said
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dramedy
It's quite good but I cannot really see if it wants to be a comedy or a drama as it got elements from both. Also if it was shorter and more concentrated on the punchlines and visual jokes then it would make a great comedy short.