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this is my SECOND VIDEO

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So-So.

It wasn't terrible, but it was confusing at parts. It's great you used alternate camera angles, that's something that makes claymations less boring, but the angles changed suddenly and I didn't have time to digest what happened. I still don't know what happened exactly. If i could offer some advice,
1. Try using different colors of clay for different people
2. Smoothly animate your camera angle transitions
3. Try to diagnose hits a little more clearly and explain what's going on better (maybe with sound or even character expressions) because it was sort of mindless.
You get a respectable 5/10 from me.

Have a nice day!

MacBoxProductions responds:

Thank you

5/5

10/10 man awesome

MacBoxProductions responds:

glad you enjoyed it!

I saw your previous one before

And just like what I said with that one I'll say it again, it wasn't terrible, but it could use some sound.

MacBoxProductions responds:

yea these are all old ones check out the newer ones.
THanks for reviewing

awesome

it was good except for that guy in the back xD

MacBoxProductions responds:

I was testing my camera so my dad was in some of the shots

Credits & Info

Views
2,213
Votes
4
Score
3.88 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 1, 2011
6:46 PM EDT