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A Depressing Story

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This is one of my first flash movies ever. It is short, and pretty bad. Please keep that in mind when voting/reviewing. You can expect to see more from me, but I have no idea how soon that will be, or if I will be any better by then. All I know now, is that I'm going to keep trying until I am satisfied with my animating/coding skills.

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Decent

Considering this is your first flash I find this a rather decent one.

But here are some things you might consider changing.

- Background: Add one, now it feels so empty.
- Explosion: Not nearly the blast of a real creeper!
- Sound: The explosion is rather weak sound-wise as well.
- The ending: the "trolololol" music feels out of place and unnecessary
- Buttons: Play buttons are an animators friend.

Anyways keep working hard on improving!

Bubbleriderlbp responds:

Ok, I'll consider that. I agree with you about 95%. Thanks.

Credits & Info

Views
3,305
Faves:
1
Votes
4
Score
3.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 27, 2011
11:16 PM EDT
Genre
Drama