pretty good...
The thing is, not all rivers are rock-free. There are bound to be rapids, and learning to make those takes time, so im not holding that against you, but if you intend to use rivers, i suggest you learn to make trails of water.
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New to flash and made an attempt at making a river
Very good
This is indeed a good experimental animation. The sounds are perfect, and it sounds really peaceful. It reminds of Bitey of Brackenwood with the sounds.
Affero responds:
To all of you who commented on the sounds, I just want to make it clear that i DID NOT make these sounds myself. I got them from a site that gives out free flash sound effects. I just thought they fitted so I put em in, anyhow thanks for the feedback :)
good job
it is very well done. oh! and the birds sounds really paceful!
Affero responds:
To all of you who commented on the sounds, I just want to make it clear that i DID NOT make these sounds myself. I got them from a site that gives out free flash sound effects. I just thought they fitted so I put em in, anyhow thanks for the feedback :)
waiting for longer movie
that was not a movie but it was very good short animation and the sound fit in perfectly
so I gave it a nine cause it look better than a lot of them I have seen on newgrounds.
keep try
it take time
Affero responds:
To all of you who commented on the sounds, I just want to make it clear that i DID NOT make these sounds myself. I got them from a site that gives out free flash sound effects. I just thought they fitted so I put em in, anyhow thanks for the feedback :)
is this...
nothings happening...
Affero responds:
Yes somethings happening, water is running down a stream. As I wrote in the description, it's just a test.