I liked it, but it needs sound.
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This is my first flash on Newgrounds and I'm excited about it! I hope you all enjoy the show; however, it isn't all that great. I was basically learning different animating skills in this flash. I'm still a beginner (even though I have had flash for 5 years I haven't used it that much but I have watched my brother, cheezlog, work on a few. He is coming out with a REALLY good Christmas flash soon!!) so enjoy.
decent
good but needs sound
LotsAflash responds:
Thanks I made it like a year ago... So now I'm making a new awesome one!!! Hahaha I just started doing flash again.
Good job
This video was good. The animation was fluid and clear. There needs to be music and voices. The words were at times to small to read.
LotsAflash responds:
Thank you
Not bad
That looks kinda nice for a first flash, but voices could have been something good.
Also at some point it could have been a bit less choppy.
But hey! it's a first attempt, uh ;)
Still a good job.
LotsAflash responds:
These comments are the kind I like because I can know what I need to improve instead of telling me something like: Hey this sucks Me: Thanks....
Thanks Salbakra
voices
that was cool, but u could add some voices...