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PLEASE READ BELOW!

!UPDATE 6/4/11!: i have fixed a few flaws and i have made the credits flow nicer so you can see whp actually made it :) thanks for the constructive criticizem from its fist release

Expect part 2 of immortal to be much more polished and overall new animation style for it, exspect part 2 to describe all the lost backstory to why this random stick war is even happening and why a green guy is going after a regular black stick man who turns green when hes hurt and cannot die!

i started this back in 2009 but felt like finishing it just for fun, if it gets good reception il make a sequal, i know theres flaws but a again good feedback il fix these flaws :D

Description of series

a whole horde of bounty hunters and cops have a epic war trying to find an a illegal chemtester named pvt. cooper who was once in the army, he has taken a chem known as immosine witch while digested gives you the power of immortality for a limited time! will the cop find him first or the bounty hunter!

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Same as before

I really didn't see a change from the 1st one man. Keep at it though!

Yet another stick figure fight

Is there no end to these? I understand people want to be animators but without talent in drawing one should look to alternatives such as sprites or other image manipulation. There is also no plot or story to engage the viewer, you can put a whole page of text in the author's comments but, in the end, the film must stand on its own.

megadudu responds:

i agree, the second part though will explain the next parts and why this is all happening, try and read the authors comments next time instead of stareing at it and judging the animation for what it is.

???

I could have sworn that I just saw this before???

megadudu responds:

this is the 3rd time ive uploaded it... first 2 times had much flaws that i needed to fix

nice..

decent for a stick movie, nice sound. Only one complaint, I could'nt make out what was said at the end because the background music was louder than the voice. Other than that, good job!

The heavy metal was a little unnecessary.

and the animation wasn't very fluent, and the fact that it was stick guys makes the fluent fact much worse.

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