Its OK
Its a bit slow-paced and the sound is very echo-y,
Otherwise , the sound, music, art, animation etc are OK and the credits are fine
This is a short animation which features 3 of my characters from my web comic strip titled: "Poet Ink."
If you would like to view my comic strip website it's here: http://www.poetinkcomic.c om
Thanks for watching, and I hope you like it!
Its OK
Its a bit slow-paced and the sound is very echo-y,
Otherwise , the sound, music, art, animation etc are OK and the credits are fine
Thanks IceDragon64.
Unfortunately the reason the voices are so echo-y (and tinny), is the free sound editor I'm using causes the echo for some reason when I raise the pitch on the voices.
I've tried the noise reduction filters in the program, but none of them get rid of the echo-y (and tinny) sound. If you know of another (better) sound editor (free if at all possible), please point me to it, cause I haven't been able to find one yet. And thank you sincerely for the constructive criticism. I agree that it is a maybe too slowly paced, I was worried about that specifically, but was afraid of it coming off too fast paced if I did it faster.