Your on the right track.
I liked your style of animation. You have a good foundation of a stick fight. What I was hoping for though, was maybe the screen shaking, voices and more sound effects, oh and maybe more background but I like the 3D feeling.
nice animation but it is too short and the camera so close-up...
The close up camera is (well, maybe) my style.
Anyway, thanks for the review. :)