Suggestions
I would try to find a way to make the letters contrast with the background more. It is -kinda- hard to read.
Add some sounds for the sand blowing in the wind around the skull and you have a credible ad.
Author Comments
please give me feedback as i want to improve what do you think of it sorry i dont have audio but it will come.
beerboydank responds:
thanks for the tips and i did mention i didnt have audio on my computer