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Here is my submission for TOFA, had to cut it short cause of work and real life.

-Jake

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That not your best work.

The animation was the only good point. The story is short (yeah i know you have cut it, too bad) and the voice acting is fucking horrible. it was a little boring too.


Lazymodecomics responds:

I happen to be a master of voices. My voice acting is so superb mimes congratulate me.


Not Too Shabby

Your artwork and animation are great, you know what you're doing that's for sure. The sound effects I wasn't too impressed with. There was no music, which I find no excuse for seeing as this is a game show and the goal is an obstacle course so if you don't have announcers calling this then background music would be appropriate, check the Audio Portal here on Newgrounds from now on. The story is basic, but not built up well enough, all we know is we have a host with no name, some contestants, and an obstacle course. Despite all of this though I would love to see you advance to the next round because I want to see more from you and what else you can do.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Great Animation
*Good Sound
*Good Voice
*Okay Story

|| Bad Points ||
*No Music


Lazymodecomics responds:

The host's name is The General.


ah hummmmmm....... att ...

your moves are fluid is awesome but is shot and the scrip have more spicy for the audence with a funny or action end

keep working and your drwan its amazing =)



More!

Would really like to see more. It reminds me a lot of Aeon Flux, a style of animation/story of which I love.



Is this finished?

It seems like you wrapped it up kinda fast and didn't really address most of your contestants

+unique drawing style
+funny parody intro

-seemed a tad rushed in the conclusion
-voice acting and audio quality could have been better

le approve


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Views
6,048
Votes
374
Score
3.56 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 10, 2011
1:49 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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