for an experiment it turned out well. will there be a finished product, if not what was it based off of?
it might be an intresting read.
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This is my first flash movie. It is mostly experimental, so i didn't get the time to colour it.
Nice! I don't know what inspired you to do that, but it must've been cool! Congrats, my friend!
Great!
Keep up the good work ;)
karkooz responds:
Thanks! Your music make it so much better :)
Pretty Good
Its not bad, pretty good for something experimental.
Alot of potential from what I saw, you just need to focus on finishing it now.
well done, keep up the good work.
If I were you i'd...
Edit it a little, like color, maybe give him a spear at the end instead of an arrow, make it a little longer, add more of a story, and then post it again as a final project, other than that its pretty good
