A while back, I saw a Robert Benfer video on youtube when Rob visited his friend, Dom Fera, also known on Newgrounds as D-fear331. During Robert's visit, Dom played him an improvised songs. This is my interpretation of that never published song.
I chuckled :)
The song was quite funny though not very creative.
The animation and drawings were bad but did the job of showing what's going on.
Audio was good but there was a bit of distortion.
I give it a 4/10 because you wrote a song which made me chuckle a bit
Actually, I didn't write the song, it was d-fear331
Okay...
Terrible animation, um... reasonable song... I guess. You should really get someone better to animate this so that you can bring this song to life. Plus, you should really Flash to reduce the file size and for better graphics. It's... just a really poor attempt at a good idea.
I'm glad to hear people's opinions. Even if they think my ideas are bad. I actually don't have flash, I just used a free .MPEG to .SWF program to convert the original video to Flash. My hand drawn animation was pretty bad. I made this last summer and it was really only about 25 pictures/ frames used in this video. Although it took me FOREVER to make it. I'm such a lazy asshole. I know the basics of how to make flash but I don't have the means to purchase a flash program. As for the automatic replay, i'll make sure that in my other videos, i'll have some sort of main menu using Adobe Premiere Elements.
No preloader and poor animation
If you're going to have a chunky 7.9MB file - you're going to need a preloader. Fact. The movie doesn't load properly and totally breaks apart the flow of the movie.
The art itself isn't anything to write home about either... crudely drawn with a Biro pen and a few coloured felt tip pens.
Get Flash and learn how to use it... and make sure you fill the move space to avoid the letterbox stopping before the edge.
It's ok that you don't like this. I still think you're the prettiest girl ;D