Poe - etic !

No, I didn't wrote the word wrong, this is intendend, 'cause this flashmovie reminds me a lot of Edgar A. Poe's grotesque tales, especially "the man that was used up" (1839).

Not because of the topic, it's the style you use. I guess Mr. Poe whould have liked it. Even the fact that the girl stays asleep is acceptable in a grotesque tale, my problem is that the storyline is a bit too slow-paced in my eyes, if you could work on that - perfect!

But still, nice work, I hope to see more of it soon :-)

Those monster things..

Yeah, I'm gonna have nightmares because of those things. xD

I can't really find any fault with the animation per se, I just think you need a bit more practice. The only thing I would critizise would be the plot; who sleeps through having their feet cut and torn off, really? xD Maybe if you provided a visual explanation, or something that would make clear why the girl isn't waking up, screaming in pain and horror?

It was still a very neat animation.

Intense

Like a trip between edward scissor hands...the episode of rubberman from aqua teen hunger force...some odd foot fetish...and a gloomy afternoon in a horrifyingly desolate and lonely park...

Woah O.o

that was... creepy...

that fully reminded me of the nightmare before christmas.

Wrong Foot!

lol. It's like Saw meets Edward Scissorhands haha we're looking forward to see more of your works. Break a leg!