No need for insulting!

If you didn't like it all Blitzkrieg667, then why even bother leaving a comment? At least this person said they 'tried their best.' You have to give 'em credit for trying and not giving up on making this. I liked this animation, unlike you, Blitzkrieg667.

Ew...

I can't give any criticism on this. Really, it's just...

0. There's no way you can improve this, since I just ahet it.

Before you get all butthurt.

I said I hate it.

Not that it's bad.

Just in case you're under the impression I'm insulting you.

Which of course you do judging by my previous review.

All I can say is to make something original next time. You're not a bad animator, but you really need some original ideas. I'll say it again, just placing an audio clip over one of your animations is in no way funny. And you have no right to be an artist if you can't take criticism.

Don't take this as discouragement, take it as something to improve on. Read over my review on your other Flash and then improve on what I pointed out. I'd like to see you get by like this in real life.

But, I suggest buying a tablet. It's easier to draw with. The quality of these drawings is... mediocre, at best. It's better than what I could do until last year, but it still needs lots of work.

Don't get discouraged by this review, you'll get better as time passes, but don't just place audio over poorly animated characters, it's noobish, it's unoriginal, and chances are it will look bad. And don't bother insulting me either, I'll keep cominh back, since all I'm doing is trying to help. Read through my reviews and improve. These are my opinions, and people are entitled to their own opinions. If you get so butthurt because someone has their own personal oppinion to just vtell them to fuck off... Yeah.

I think I repeated my self a little. Hell, I know I did, but hopefully you've read through this and took it into consideration.

Oh, just a side note, you can skip through this if you want, but

I don't see how not takeing animation classes has anything to do with anything. I'm in Primary School, I didn't take classes, in fact I learned most of the Flash interface myself. I don't see how animation classes would have any effect on your skills at all. I personally think they're a crapload waste of time. You can't be taught skill. Just something I thought I should say, it does't really have anything to do with the animation.

I'm still voting no stars, but that's just my opinion. And in the end, that's all art is, an opinion. If art were fact then we wouldn't have any reason to be artists, now would we?

v great for expectations.

For not taking any animation classes this is really good.

I get it

It's one of those flashes that people try to get stuck in their heads so they want to see again. it was funny but it would be better if a story was added to it. the art was ok but somewhat vague

Good one!

Well....This is great for someone who never learned to make flashes! You've surprised me! I first watched your kirby video and I liked it. This one is even better!
Like I said on my last comment, I really love people with originality. With this one, you just gave me a perfect exemple of originality and effort. You know my criteria:

1-Originality----10/10 ( You drew the characters by yourself)
2-Effort-------10/10 ( I'm sure that a lot of effort went in this video)
3-Quality------8/10 ( You just need to improve your drawings a little bit.)

Otherwise, your video is really good.
Make more!

Friendly,
Rocket-Kid :D