1st flash not bad
i give you 5 for the troll and 1 for the animation
Author Comments
Basically, this is my flash project that i had to turn in after spring break and for some reason this took FOREVER!
I seriously don't know HOW some animators like Oney and Happy Harry do it.
WARNING : Well this is my FIRST flash ever so , its REALLY bad...
*Oh and i know Easter was yesterday and this is kinda late ... i cant upload anything from my house, so i gotta use my animation class's computers to upload anything...
Audio used : Windfall Island - Zelda Windwaker
Earthworm Jim 2 - intro music
***PLEASE leave reviews
even the ones that will make me feel like shit, i NEED to know what you think so i can improve
ZELDA MUSIC!!!!! - 1st animation....great effort
If the rating system had a rating for YOUR skill level compared to YOUR experience....you get a 7/10
but I give you a 2 in comparison to other animations on newgrounds. Seems like school ....
2 for being more than still images, less than 3 because it needed a few more frames of animation inbetween, some touch up work and a bit more sound.
MORE DETAIL:
I love the drawing of the bunny rabbit....obviously spongebob or ren&stimpy influence?
Music was a good choice.
I like the bobbing up and down of the character.
There is a quality difference with the background in the main camera angle, and the easter egg getting picked up angle.
ADVICE:
- draw lots and lots and lots and lots. The more you draw the better you get.
- learn some anatomy, humans, dogs, everything you are interested in.
- practice some flash tutorials....symbols, motion tweening, sound, actionscript..etc
- learn the 10 animation principles.
- keep up the effort and energy, you have the potential...its in the bunny!!
Good luck on the next animation. Time to move forward! (time...lol...animation..)
CHACHA
ArcadeMan09 responds:
lol this IS a school project :P
thats why i said its REALLY bad
the thing is i CAN draw, but only on paper...
OH, and thank you so much for the critic, it means alot
Very poorly made
Could have been better but still a funny joke. But if it is your 1st good try, i give you a 5.2 so heres a 5. Make better flashes in the future if you want to stay as an animator on a website
ArcadeMan09 responds:
yea its bad. like i said i have ZERO experience in flash.
im still learning and im planning to get better.
but thanks for leaving a review it means ALOT