Pretty good for a rap but what's with the girl at the end?

...UMMM????

what's with the girl, and that is the slowest rap...uhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Bad Ass

Loved the rap and how you done the text, very intriguing. I just didnt like the ending where the girl stick out her hands, didnt fit well with the video in my opinion.

WOW Impressive

Wow this video you made is very good and very amazing. The animation you made for this flash video is very well done. And the graphics where very awesome. And very well done. The rap you made was very good and it fit the flash really well. Everything was done right and everything fit the flash perfectly. Excellent job on making this flash video. Great work.

Let me tell you something...

First of all, I'm rather surprised that you made this animation with only your mouse. It was pretty good and it shows how much you've improved when compared to your other animations.

I'd suggest to invest some money for a pen tablet because it seems like you can do far better than now. The small ones don't really cost as much as you may think.

Seeing your other animations like Love on the Beach or Looking at my ... made me realize how much potential you actually have. As for humor, art and animation. I'd really like to see an animation made with a tablet someday.

Anyway, back to the actual review. Short and to the point: Your animation and art skills in this one really improved. I liked the timing and fluidness of it, too. Nonetheless, I know you can do much better. So 10/10 for you.

Keep up the good work. ;)