few things bugging me

Has a lot of potential but needs some sort of sound. Voices, music, sound effects, anything. Without sound it is boring. And also, your spelling and grammar is horrible. I find the short text language annoying as hell, so if you're going to type out the words or whatever, please spell it right and full-ly. Not 2 for two, or dat for that.

nice

make a sequel, umm needs to b longer, more interactiveness needed...

the concept is good...

the story board... could be great. the animation... purtee good... little closer on the action, please... and either use voice acting or music. flash without sound isnt flashy at all. I would say make another couple hundred... but add sound!!! thats my only true complaint.

kool

its kinda choppy, but its easy to understand... it would have a nine but that word that was spelled wrong brought it down a noch or 2