Gotta say...not bad at all.
Animation; 7 / 10
Audio; 2 / 10
Content; 7 / 10
Okay! Animation was actually not bad at all! It was fairly smooth and you did lipsyncing! Yaaay! Well done in that respect! Audio is your biggest problem in this animation, I would seriously consider getting a better mic! If you are planning to continue making animations like this you should invest in a better mic. Content was very clever I thought so I don't think you will have any future problems with creating funny or clever content.
Please, please, please get a better mic! If you do that I am certain that you will be producing much better animations. Do keep up the good work!
All in all; 5 / 10
watchable but not great
You had the potential to make this good but the animation, audio and the fact it was just a one liner joke set you back. Why don't you just add to it and send it back, good try though.
Could've been funny
I am no animator of flash cartoons, so in all likelihood any cartoon will be invariably better than any I might make now. My sole complaint with this has to do with the vocals...they were unintelligible to me, meaning they were blurred beyond the comprehension of these mortal ears. I wish you the peace, the love, and all the cheeseburgers and...happy ghoo0oostmas day.
But your voice acting is horrendous. I advise finding someone to voice for you who isn't a rank amateur and trying this again. You have potential, just a potential that involves writing and animating for someone who can properly convey your script.
improve the audio
you should improve the audio i can barely understand a word of what they talk
also you should improve the character`s illustration they look a bit out of form
specially whit the arm of the guy holding the board