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Just a simple animation for fun, nothing serious in all this...
ps:i still not good speack english... now it's my voice (Sometimes I deliberately speak evil)

music: final fantasy 7 and inception

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Pretty good; pretty true

Yeah, the RFID thing... I wonder how many people will accept them.

Honestly, very good!

However,it's hard to hear the voices. Your accent honestly adds to the video, making it better. And the idea of the video is nice and original.

Hay, this iver not to bad at all!

Animation; 8 / 10
Audio; 6 / 10
Content; 10 / 10

Okay the animation was really very good, I liked it a lot. I did notice however that you decided against lipsyncing? Trust me, I completely understand how difficult it can be, but I suggest you try to hide it by adding in more mouth movements so that you have more variation! Audio was alright, I found it difficult to understand what was going on in the animation. I really suggest that you put in subtitles so that the audio is made up for! Content, was billiant, seriously good idea! I loved the ending and suggest that you inpliment a few things i have said and carry on making new animations! You have some brilliant ideas and should definately continue animating!

All in all; 8 / 10

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4.00 / 5.00

Apr 10, 2011
8:23 AM EDT