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fairies in the woods

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this is a movie about butterfly fairies and their life.

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Well Done!

Hello Mate!
This is another flash that honestly showcases your improvements!
I know I keep saying that you keep improving but you honestly do.
I liked the spider and all the characters really and I also noticed the voices throughout were a lot more levelled, in the last few submissions some of your voices were quite high. I also like the overall improvement on your art, from your background to your characters.
Great work!
and nice choice of music ;)

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you groove T3K
I am all ways happy to read a review from you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't really hate it

This was a cartoon that had some good parts to it, but overall it just did not deliver well. The weirdest thing was the animation and just how non-sequitor it looked. I can't really call it sloppy because when I look at it, it really does strike me as unique. Some bad scenes include the caterpillar which looks like he's just airbrushed on. I couldn't find much of a point but it didn't need one. The thing is certainly unique, it's just that it's so weird it's a bit hard to enjoy.

I suggest you brush up on animation and put in more of a background. The best use of animation was actually at the end when you showed your name in the effects. I would have liked to see something of that quality throughout the whole submission. The music was kind of weird, but I guess it fit with the cartoon's theme. You certainly have potential for uniqueness.

flashmakeit responds:

well thanks for the interesting review
the animation at the end is called a shape tween that is easy to do it just hard to do in color.
the story was suppose to be about how a butterfly would live if it was a fairy why is that so weird?

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3.54 / 5.00

Apr 8, 2011
8:20 PM EDT