funny and i fix the probloms
Not really funny, graphics weren't 'bad'
Like other animated shorts I've reviewed today, people are determined not to take time with something that could actually turn out decent. I mean, you got the animating thing ok (we're not talking Adam Phillips animating but for what it is). just needs to be a bit more funnier (if that's what you're aiming for), and perhaps something the people watching can actually say 'wow, not bad, I liked that'.
3/10.
thanks, i now it was kind of sucks script... but i will try to improve it in next time:)
Ummm
Yeah well the animation I will say was decent not choppy or poorly made but sit "It work!" yeah not really a sentance or even a phrase not a really a parody niether but you can make a good one if you wanted to I think.
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this is ridiculous
WTF did I just watch?!
In which way is this intended to be a parody? A "knight" using lasers shoots at a billboard and then gets hit by a piece of it?
That's not a parody, that's dumb. And the misspelling makes it look even more retarded than it already is.
it was my first ever animation....