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The Shaft of Shame

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I had intended to call this "The Sword" but it was taken. >.<

This is my first time using Flash, I had a lot of problems I had to iron out and finally this was the result. I learned so much from this one and my mistakes that the next ones in the future should only improve. This movie is based off the massive stack of sketched out comics I have never done anything with but use as a coaster. Now, I'm addicted to bringing those crude sketches to life.

Also note, I am in the process of saving up for a mic and wacom tablet to increase the quality of my movies, but right now rent and college are eating my checks like a fat kid released freely into a candy store...man I miss my childhood : /

Please feel free to proved input and constructive criticism, I'll take it like a man(baby). /flex

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Nice Detail

The background is ok. The Castle needs some work on the shaping of it. I liked the armor on the guys it looked pretty cool. The guy on the right looked like WoW shoulder pads for a Rogue. The Dick sword needed more detail. but is was funny as hell either detailed or not lol.

BalladBlack responds:

Lol I totally modeled the shoulders after tier 0 from the good ole days. I am in the process of remaking this movie with better detail and movements.

Animation could use improvement

All in all a quick funny flash, but the animation couldve been improved. Keep trying for that award, man.

BalladBlack responds:

Thanks for the input,man. The next one will have more life added to the characters and less standing in a one shot camera.

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2,770
Votes
4
Score
2.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 31, 2011
9:07 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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