Ummm yeah

It aint bad, but I guess you just wanted to get some feedback. As an animation it is horrible though like a -5 but as a first drawing it is like a 6 so I'll give you a 2 overall.

ugh

This isn't an animation it's just you drawing something poorly. Dude why would you submit this?

Cool

Really good for your first try! Well done on making this! Just think what you can make after you've got more practice.....