spoink!!!!

If this is your first serious attempt then I cant wait to see what comes next... Yes the art is crude and in places some of the acting and sound is a little ropey, but the writing and story telling is brilliant... Keep up the amazing work

dude i wanna work with you! =)

i want to incorporate my animations to yours. =)

your main character seems like he needs some of "Buryaman"'s help. Buryaman is a deep penetration NBI - (Philippine's own FBI) - agent.. and he has this "anting-anting" that renders him partially invulnerable...pretty useful for firefights. =)

unfortunately unlike your character he tends to shoot first before asking questions - shoots with a classic M1928 Thompson with the drum.
he could compliment your character very well.. =)

More Please!

I love the story very Harry Dresden-ish.I love law enforcement and magic so I'm hooked.

Cool...

I love the story so far. The voicing is okay, sometimes it sounds strange. The art is alright. You could really get me hooked if you freshened up your art work. Good job overall.

It's Good

3/5 for the drawing and 5/5 for the story. Hope you continue making this series and improve your drawing skills, i know we have to start somewhere (and you just got started) you're doing a good job so far.