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Youxi Demo

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Hope you guys like it. Tell me if there needs to be any improvements (i'm a beginner)

My RHG youxi : http://www.fluidanims.com /rhg/M-XII

Visit : http://www.fluidanims.com
http://m-xii.deviantart.c om/

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great!

Great one! I'm giving 7 only because it's way too short..

Looks promising.

Keep it up.

Demos shouldn't be here

If you're actually looking for advice on this, your best bet would be to post it to your dumping grounds and put the link up in the animator's forum. You'll got some decent advice there. Posting something as short as this in the portal is just asking for a bunch of reviews complaining about its length or the fact that it's stick figures.

That being said, there's not much to review here. Everything looks fine. It looks like you've got the basic concepts down. You just need to set your sights a little higher and make something a little more ambitious. I looks fine for clip that's less than 10 seconds.

hmmm...

well, im giving this a five for just being as short as it is, and also being a demo
however, it looks interesting, and I hope that you finish it, as the musics good, and it plays just fine
get that video done before submitting another however, or my rating will be lower on the next one >,,>

Difficult to judge

It's very difficult to judge what needs to be improved from such a short movie. Even a 30 second scene would of allowed me to get the gist of what you were trying to achieve.

But from what I saw, the animation is smooth and precise. You may have potential.