Eh. At least you tried. Nice touch with the Speakonia voice. Was that a joke or meant to be their actual serious voice?
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watch this flash i made then tell me how i did.by leaving a comment
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THIS IS BULLSHIT!
Not very well...
Set the framerate to 24fps. Consider investing in a drawing tablet of some sort. Record voices or request the assistance of a voice actor, Microsoft Sam and other Text to speech programs are very unprofessional. I'm sure there are plenty on the NG audio forums who are willing to help. Make backgrounds, study perspective. The character in the desk at the beginning looked rather flat on the top down view. The female character's cleavage starts from her neck rather than her chest, and it's rather disturbing. The story progresses slowly, and I honestly have no idea what's going on.
Improve on these, and I'm sure your animation will make more sense and bring in more viewers.
