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Rainbow Math Short-Mohawk

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Crown Guy announces his next new look!


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Visit the official Rainbow Math website! http://www.rainbowmath.tk /


I worked hard on this, so I'd like some reviews expressing your opinions toward this cartoon. It would be highly appreciated.


~DJG~

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Good start, keep at it!

You've got a good starting point here, with a lot to build on! You're going to want to watch the audio quality, I know that can be tough with just an average computer mic, but little tricks can make sound better. For one, try not to talk too closely directly into the mic. Hold it about 8 inches away and talk right ABOVE the mic. You'll still get good sound but it won't pop and crackle as much.

It's tricky to do lip syncing just on a loop, but if you want to do that it will help if you move the characters more. Make them separate symbols and just motion tween them a bit while they're talking. It will add a lot. Good luck with it, DJ!

kfdwiki responds:

Thank you for their review!

Yeah, I'm a little bad at lip syncing. It's kinda hard and boring and I turn into one of those "whatever, I'll just wing it" moods.

But again, thanks!

lol

Very funny and original. Minus 2 points because it starts playing without me hitting the play button, so I give it an 8 out of 10. Keep it up.

kfdwiki responds:

Thank you for the good review. The thing about the "play button"........... don't know how to make one. I'll look this up later.

~DJG~

Yeah...

This isn't funny, the characters are dumb, and the animation quality is terrible. Keep working at it and I'm sure you'll get better at it.

kfdwiki responds:

Well, the characters are supposed to be "dumb". At least in a humorous way.

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Score
3.79 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 13, 2011
4:07 PM EDT