Good job

I thought it was really good, nice humour and the quote on the cigarettes was the best bit.
"..its like putting shit in your mouth and setting it on fire" lol

hmm is this a mafia wars reference?
I am sure there is a stealing cigar mission

Please continue

You may be aware that your style or jokes are not exceptional, however it's not too stupid and it has humor, also the animation was pretty smooth even for such a simple one. I personally would like to see more :). Good luck to you.

And yeah, the story was a bit silly but funny. ;)

8/10 rating. I would give you 6 but it looks like you really try, and you have a serious approach (planning other series) so in comparison to many other amateur movies this one Does deserve 8 :).

Good humour

Hey, liked the story, but you have some problems with the sound which will make some users downvote the movie.

Anyway, hope I'll see a second part and if you put a little more time into polishing it you might have a winner. Good luck!