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OCT1 -Training and Travel

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After months of hiatus I decided to work on a drawing style that I would be comfortable with, especially in animation. By entering an OCT I can start practicing animation.

I went back and fixed the audio issues. Now everything is on 'stream', everything is compressed (smaller file size now), and I fixed the preloader code a bit. Things should run smoothly now.

I'm changing the actual title of the series because frankly the title "Original Character Tournament" is too general. There are many other OCTs on the internet and this is just another of them.

The new title is called, "Dareva's Last Will OCT" because that is the name of the OCT. However I can't change the actual title in the Newgrounds submission details so it will still appear as OCT.

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this is awesome

Nice and simple.

You made yourself an interesting series. I love the simplicity of it. You have some nice humor in it, which keeps it from being boring, and the progression of the series is very nice. Keep up the good work. :3

Really goooooooooooooooooooood!

It' s great but when you continue the series? I would know other caracters and I would see more fight!

thats hillarious

hmm it says here u dont know how to use magic............... :3

Not Bad

This was pretty good for someone who seems to be relatively new to animating. The animation was pretty smooth and the sound was good.

However a couple things to work on, first of all the voice acting was really lackluster. The guy sounded so unenthusiastic with everything he said. Put a little more feeling into it and this would have been much better. Second, you could add just a bit more animation to it. There wasn't much in terms of movement and that would help a lot (especially with the silent girl).

I enjoyed watching this and got a few giggles out of it, I look forward to seeing the next part of this. Keep practicing and good luck.

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3.28 / 5.00

Mar 12, 2011
5:53 PM EST