You gave a good attempt.
What can I say? No one hits gold on their first try. Keep at it, you'll get better. Atleast you know what you're doing, now you just have to put more time into it xD sound would also help.
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this is my firts animation but i will upload more flashes better and funniest
Not great, but a good start
I liked the somewhat natural walking movement and the way the scenery seemed to scroll by at a reasonable pace. Keep working on it, I'm sure you'll eventually do great.
well...
with better animation and sound, potentially a more obvious political view, yes, i caught that industry is destroying nature, and this could be either a great noir or comedic flash. It just was too pointless for my taste... refine your art and id like to see more from you in the future...
SKMZBK responds:
thanks the next will better and a better story cuz i will make a seria called the confution of the time
Screen is to big.
Your video screen is to big. I can't see the whole thing... But it looks like you have potential. Keep it up, make one longer and put more effort into it!
SKMZBK responds:
ok thank for the coments and as i respond in the upper comment i will mwke an other one (smaller screen) and will be better