i maw gaaaaaaawd!

screw the facts! just make this as scary as you possibley fucking can!

Needs improvement

So, this is what is going to show up in your movie? It's really confusing. As if something just rushed through your head. I would call this a preview trailer or a teaser. But as an opening? No. Sorry. I know you worked so hard on this and it's a very nice piece. But do the proper thing for it's proper section. I know you can do it. You are very talented. Maybe it would be better explaining the situation of the story, then we might get the idea. Just get that noggin to work and imagine what comes to mind. Just nothing like this. Overall, nice animation piece. marvelous art, and good work composing.

wut

I have no idea what's going on. One minute she's running away in the subway the next she's just chillin' maxin relaxin all cool all like "i dont give a fuk n***a" seriously what is this i dont even...