Interesting... but not enough...
You definitely have a skill in using flash. But I feel that this flash was lacking... interesting stuff. Most of the scenes had a severe lack of background sound or voices, and the text was mostly small and difficult to read. Even though your drawings were pretty good, most were done with the line/pencil tool, which gave everything a very 2D like perspective. The story wasn't especially captivating or exciting in anyway... neither did I find any of the characters interesting or intriguing...
The 'connecting' part was really long and annoying... the death of General 'Warpath was rather random... (but great drawings). The loading thing with the hologram was rather cool, but the lack of voices ruined the scene...
Sorry to point out so many bad things, but i'm trying to identify what you need to improve. If this is your first flash movie, you should experiment before trying to make a massive storyline. You definitely need to work on using the brush/pencil tool, because the drawings are really 2D and look childish. Try not relying on real pictures so much and get in touch with your drawing skills. The last scene with the planets was very nicely coordinated. Hope to see something better from you later!