Very good...
But needs to be a little longer maybe 1 minute longer... Good though!!
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Watch parts 1, 2 and 3 first!
Part 1: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/564011
Part 2: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/564014
Part 3: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/564076
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The first episode of hallucination land! Four kids wake up in the middle of a strange place. They have no idea where they are. They find a very strange cave...
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GENRE: Comedy
WARNING: Viewer Discretion Advised!!!
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Credits: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3 87872/Hallucination%20Lan d/Where%20are%20we%20Cred its/Hallucination%20Land%
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Hope ya Like it!
Edit: I made this at 30 fps, but when rendered out the audio was way off, I change the fps to 24 and the audio synced, the first 3 still are 30 fps.
HallucinationLand responds:
Thanks! I had actually planned on making it way longer than it is, but I was working in high def and my computer was lagging way too much, I figured that I would be able to get more done if I ended the project and didn't do high def for the next one.
Hey is that...
South Park???
HallucinationLand responds:
Kinda, wanted to try the style out, reason is in the description of part 1.
Good
I can tell you put a lot of work into it but a few things you should work on are the quality of the audio and the length of your flash/compression of your files. The jokes were hit and miss too.
For me, they all missed. I couldn't hear very well and I didn't really hear a joke, only rambling. But I'm sure they were in there.
Ahem. 6/10 for a good effort.
HallucinationLand responds:
Alright thanks for the suggestions. I'll look more into optimizing it for newgrounds. Was originally made with youtube HD in mind.
Might have to get a better mic I think...
Gonna do it the other way around from now on, newgrounds first hah.
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