Not bad
decent animations and sound effects, and a plot that is able to be followed, overall not bad for an early submission, keep up the work mate and keep learning you have some talent :D
Author Comments
Swift and friends get a visitor.
Second flash I ever made, and a lot better than my first.
Okay, I started this out a long time ago, and finally got it done. There is no dialog in this cartoon at all. This was a make this up as I go kind of thing and me playing around with flash to see what works and what doesn't. Thought I'd introduce two new characters: Luna and Chickanous.
These two may not get developed much, but that's for the next cartoon. I'm just glad to get something done to let you know that I'm alive and working.
While it may not seem very much of a cartoon as far a storyline is concerned, just think of it as a surreal expiriment.
Everything done by me.
All characters are made and owned by me.
Tillerian responds:
Thanks for the encouragement. I'll keep working on more cartoons and, as a result, get better at them.
A Good Start... For a Sonic The Hedgehog Ripoff
It's a good start, but plot/character-wise, it needs a lot of work!
Tillerian responds:
Thanks! I know there's a lot of development to be done, but it'll get there.